Reviews to "Who Am I?"

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The three people who have recieved the highest scores would have to be Valerie Mattson, Jasmine Sainju, and Mohammed Alamer. Keep reading to find out why.

First, with a score of nine, Valerie Mattson. She has recieved this score because she has provided a lot of information about her and her own family. She told everyone who she is and what she likes to do. I haven't found any grammar errors and her spelling is great. I also found it interesting how she isn't afraid to talk about religion associated things and is open. Great job, Valerie!

Second of all, Jasmin Sainju, with a score of nine also. She faced a fear, and provided a great view of how her family has effected her, and also mentioned how she couldn't imagine she'd leave her home village. I also found it very impressive how she knows three languages! I can hardly imagine how many grammar rules there are and how she keeps them straight. Fantastic work, Jasmine! :)

Last but not least, Mohammed Alamer. The score he has recieved was an eight. He provided plenty of information about his background. He stated his marriage, his family, and his schooling. He even provided how long he was at a place to study, or living. Besides these, he has also stated his interests. I also liked his ending exert. It provided a nice touch. Awesome job!

Those were the reasons I have used when I gave them their scores. A lot of people did great on this job, but of course only a few were supposed to be picked. Good job, everyone!